Saturday, May 18, 2013

The Incredible Vizines. Chapter One


                                                The Incredible Vizines.


                                    
                                                 Chapter I
                                                 Beginnings


    Once upon a time, for that is how all good stories begin, there was a budding family, called the Vizines. They were, as you call it supernatural, though Mr. & Mrs. Vizine’s three daughters did not know. The oldest, Pauline, who is 15 at the time that this story is written, was rescued of a sinking ship and put into an orphanage. She was only there for a few days when the newlyweds, Mr. & Mrs. Vizines adopted her. She never remembered her real parents, who were killed when she was 5 days old. Two years after the adoption of Pauline, Mrs. Vizine had a baby girl which they named Piper.
                
                 2 years after the birth of Piper, The Vizines went to show Pauline the orphanage where they found her. As they were showing Pauline around, the found another precious baby girl name Petrova.  They asked a nearby worker to tell them her background. The worker told them that she was from Russia and that her family was moving here and her father died: leaving his wife with their 3 month old baby. Her family was very poor, and Petrova’s mother did not have enough money to care for her, so she put her baby in the orphanage. “ Petrova is one now, and , though everyone has thought she was cute, no one has seemed to think she is a perfect as you do.” Mrs Vizine sighed, looking at the angelic face. “ She is perfect. I think she would fit in with us just fine! What do you think girls?” Pauline answered quickly. “ Oh, Mother! She’s adorable! I love her!” She surprised the worker with such a big word, for she was only 4. But  her parents knew that these were the kind of words their Pauline used. Mr. Vizine brought Petrova home while his wife was taking the children on a walk. When they got home, they seemed to be frozen on the spot, looking at the baby in their fathers arms. He whispered to his wife, “ I know what will break their trance.” “ Girls! Who wants to hold her first?”

8 comments:

  1. I like it!! I really like the name Petrova. They used it in a book called "Ballet Shoes" by Noel Streatfield.:)

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  2. I know! I just finished the book and if you look, I copied Pauline's story from the book too. I copied a lot of the book. It's soooooo good!

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  3. I love that book!! I love how you incorporated some of the book into your story!!

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  4. More like copied some of the book for my story.

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  5. Can you get it at the library?

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  6. Ballet Shoes? Yes, that's were I got it.

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